{"id":12,"date":"2007-07-11T11:26:49","date_gmt":"2007-07-11T15:26:49","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/noelfigart.com\/blog\/?p=12"},"modified":"2007-07-11T11:26:49","modified_gmt":"2007-07-11T15:26:49","slug":"just-tell-the-fucking-story","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/noelfigart.com\/wordpress\/2007\/07\/11\/just-tell-the-fucking-story\/","title":{"rendered":"Just Tell the Fucking Story"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I feel like I&#8217;ve been beaten with a stick.<\/p>\n<p>I was getting behind on my novel and wrote about 2200 words yesterday. I know, it doesn&#8217;t sound like much, but if you have a full-time job, that&#8217;s rough.<\/p>\n<p>I think people who do NaNoWriMo are insane (that&#8217;s about 1600 words a day every day for a month).<\/p>\n<p>Doing 1000 words a day works best for me. It&#8217;s enough to give it some heft for the writing session, but not so much that I&#8217;m going nuts.<\/p>\n<p>I wish I were Neil Gaiman sometimes.  It seems so easy for him, how he seems to be able to pop out <em>good<\/em> material on a constant basis. Yes, yes, yes, I know. A) He&#8217;s talented. B) He went through that most rigorous of writing boot camps &#8212; working as a professional journalist. No <em>artiste<\/em> temperament allowed.  Put out good copy or don&#8217;t eat.<\/p>\n<p>At some point, what it really boils down to is, &#8220;Just tell the fucking story. Your hindbrain will take care of all that stuff literature professors get orgasmic about.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>We don&#8217;t learn to write fiction in school. We learn what it takes to make a story, yes. We learn what makes a story rich and thick and good. What we don&#8217;t learn is the <em>process<\/em> of putting all that good stuff into our story gumbo, and I think part of it is because in the throes of the process, it&#8217;s not entirely a conscious thing. I&#8217;ve never heard of a writer admitting to consciously saying\/thinking, &#8220;Okay, I am going to make these sharks eating away at the huge swordfish a metaphor for my struggles to tell a good story and my fears of losing my abilities.&#8221; I have heard, however, writers saying that their best stuff is when they&#8217;re so focused on the story they&#8217;re telling that the keyboard\/computer\/typewriter fades away and all they&#8217;re conscious of is being <em>there<\/em> in the story.<\/p>\n<p>In <em>At the Foot of the Throne<\/em>, the novel I wrote last spring, there&#8217;s this recurring theme that I did not put in consciously. I needed a scene where the main character did something astonishingly foolhardy to protect the life of her King (and lover) because he had no heirs &#8212; something for the good of the kingdom.<\/p>\n<p>What <em>happened<\/em> was an encounter with a wild boar.<\/p>\n<p>Throughout the novel, and I did not think consciously about this, the antagonist king is described as being &#8220;like a boar with a toothache&#8221; or some such wild pig comparative when someone comments on his anger or aggression.<\/p>\n<p><em>I didn&#8217;t consciously choose the metaphor.<\/em>   What I did was trust my subconscious to come up with all that and stuck to telling the story.<\/p>\n<p>Now I am not claiming to be a great writer of fiction by any means. I&#8217;m not at all. At best, I am just learning to be competent. What I&#8217;ve really got to learn are editing skills &#8212; cutting away the unnecessary stuff and keeping the structure strong.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I feel like I&#8217;ve been beaten with a stick. I was getting behind on my novel and wrote about 2200 words yesterday. I know, it doesn&#8217;t sound like much, but if you have a full-time job, that&#8217;s rough. 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